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Tickle

Tickle me pink
on grasses of greens
with clouds of pearls
crowning above.

Topaz mountains
in the distance
grow dim and bleak
against our love.

The blue black night
steps in awhile
'til our sleeping
bodies waken.

A rich gleaming
red morning sky
leaves our awed minds
blessed and shaken

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