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Autumn in Bloom

Nature is falling asleep
Leaves wither and fall in a heap
The grass will not grow
Get ready for snow
The summer has fallen defeated

The harvest is ready for reaping
The sky is consistently weeping
The wind won’t stop blowing
The darkness is growing
My sun loving heart has been cheated

Orange over brown over grey over gloom
You ought to see autumn in bloom

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