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Wings Of the Black Sun

Dark lies
Broke the wings of hope
White plumes scattered in the atmosphere
Falling like rain, like tears
Upon the tomb of a broken heart
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Once I soared high
Trusting the strength of my wings
As they carried me towards love 
But sweet dreams
Left me to burn
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Now, a mere specter I stalk the deserted streets
In the glory of my fading halo
Wings of the black sun
Blurs my pain
Gives existence up for lost
In crimson desires, fallen
Ravaging my former heart
Tormented as well as tormentor 
A prisoner of pain – life, my gateway to hell 

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My inspiration - Anaal Nathrakh - When Humanity is cancer
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  • Majija
    October 18
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    Hard, hard, hard... but a good write it is. And scary mood too, really.