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Demons of my soul

I was battling so many
bodies sourrounded me

I held the greatest look
The eyes of a victor

I was winning 
So many were gone

Than, I was stupid
Let down my guard

They regrouped
Their numbers increased

I was standing
Sourrouned by all sides

Scared, alone
My wings of the raven

Hurt from so long of a battle
My sword cut and cracked

My fight this time will not be long
My angel I will not return

My love will
My soul the same

My body lost to a fight
A fight I should have never started 

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  • Nickey Mouse
    October 17
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    Eh..edit this it dosen't really have a flow.It feels more like a rant.