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Without Question

Were it not for you
My horizon would have vanished
And to the depths of darkness
I surely would be banished

Were it not for you
I would have lost my strength
To fight the world's absurdity
And race another length

Were it not for you
And your liquid golden gaze
I would tilt with the land
Unable to go my own ways

Were it not for you
Who held me when I cried
The tears would never flow again
Destroyed by fear and pride

Were it not for you
Who's quiet voice I sought
I'd listen to the scornful world
I'd be conquered, I'd be caught

Were it not for you
Who'd never let me roam
I'd never find a place to be
I'd never come back home

I'd believe in anything
Were it not for you
Only this is true, without question
I love you.

Author notes

I must make notice that the last four lines were from the song "Without Question" by Elton John, and the lines "Were it not for you" also came from that song. I was inspired by it.

Here are the words I used, in order;

Horizon
Strength
Absurdity
Gaze
Tilt
Land
Pride
Quiet
Conquered
Home

And to the one I wrote this for...I love you.

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  • GotLilt
    October 17
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    Very nice rythm and use of the word bank. Thanks for entering this.


  • ratkos
    October 16
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    wonderful rhyme ,beautiful content....and you used the words...a stellar write AWESOME