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Eternity Maybe Time travel

The symbol for eternity
Is an eight on its side
The lines intersect in the middle
And on the ends it gets wide

You can start at any point
And not come to an end
It's an ongoing circumstance
Now think about this my friend

Space goes on forever
They say the end theres none
Maybe when you get to the end
You're back to where you begun

I go the opposite direction
For the end to find
When I get back to where I started from
It really blows my mind

When your on this eight
Don't get off to late
Or you might get lost in time



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