Enter my Magical Gateway;
With the crystal clear pools of water, mirroring my soul
Beautiful skies of illuminating new life of wonders.
Calling my spirit to enter the brilliant light.
A spiritual and calming atmosphere like no other lived.
Tranquil place of love and magic, with colors of passionate hues.
Blues that romance the skies, with a rainbow of dreams to come true.
Burgundies with a hint of pink, chestnut with a melon shine.
Soulful white Orchids with fragrance of a heavenly dream.
Pure flowing water blessing my soul for an eternity.
You will never want to return to the life you lived.
Accepting dream as a place of great sensation.
No worries, no hate, no tears just eternal bliss.
The most beautiful place you’ve ever dreamed.
As you enter my Magical Gateway
Author notes
Magic Gateway by Jeremiah Morelli
A contest entry
- Magic Gateway by The Poetic Bandits.
900 points, ended November 2, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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love how you describe your magical gateway
beautiful place it sounds... thank you for sharing
Sean
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Judges Comment...
Tasty metaphors that combine a number of senses, with extremely nice imagery...how could anyone resist going through your magical gateway, it sounds idyllic and an escape to perfection of life...engaging and expressive throughout...
All the very best ~Lilac~
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Wow Iliked the imagery here. I like this world of which youspeak. Its like my own special place. its an excape from this world of problem and entry into another. Great write and I have missed your writes so much. But this brillant and you are brillant as always.take care Mom.
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