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Death from autumn rain

Wet wings will wash clean
You better fly, butterfly
Death from autumn rain

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 17
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    This is more of a short poem but takes a nice haiku form

  • peacebrat
    October 16
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    aww this poem is so sweet