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A Friendship Forgotten

I Wrap my sadness
around me like a blanket.

. . your indifference is like snow,
falling against my once warm soul.

. . bitterness is a metallic taste in my mouth
that i cant seem to get rid of.

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  • Tqop
    October 16
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    Very good. I love the imagery.


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    October 16
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    excellent write I know you too well to know your wrting with someone else in mind.


  • batheontheroof
    October 16

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    I'm left wanting more explanation for this forgotten friendship, but I can feel your sadness in the words you wrote. Pretty good, keep going!