Let me take your hand in mine
Look into my teary eyes
We are joined by design
My heart tells no lies
I want to see you bare,
Every curve, every scar
Your beauty is beyond compare
I admire who you are
I will strip before you
Letting you see all that I am
You're not ashamed of what you view
I am free to be a gentle lamb
With us there is true intimacy
For it our very souls we see
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Simply I love it!!!
I truly enjoyed every verse. Continue using this special gift of yours. I applaud you!!!
GRACY
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excellent
Beautiful
So warm and loving...........
Been wondering about you sweetie
I have up a few new ones hope you drop by to see me
Hugs
Susan~~~
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From The Heart....
for sure Bob!!!! This was lovely and your emotion was raw with sensuality for the one you love and desire.And the way you make her feel at ease and so desired no matter what her physcial appearance is so touching because most women are very aware of self and especially unclothed. Thanks for sharing this with us it is truly a big piece of your heart and I know the one you wrote it for will just cherish it forever!!! Keep on writng your heart like this it is a quality worth reading everytime from you!!!!~~~Toni~~~
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Thanks for your lovely comments. Your words are very encouraging. I hope, though, the metaphors were obvious too. It could be taken literally, of course, but much is meant to be metaphorical.
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BOLD
I LOVED THIS VERY MUCH MANY WOMEN HAVE A COMPLEX WITH SOMETHING ON THEM AND U MADE ME FEEL RELAXED ENOUGH TO GET NAKED.ESPECIALLY WHEN A MAN KNOWS A WOMAN GOES TROUGH CHANGES AND THE PART ABOUT SCARS WAS BEAUTIFUL..THERE ARE NOT TO MANY MEN OUT THERE THAT WILL EMBRACE A WOMAN FOR HER HEART AND INNER BEAUTY AS WELL AS THE FLAWS OUTSIDE.BUT THOSE SCARS IF U THINK ABOUT IT ...IS HER LIFE...THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL.
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