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Mommy

Mommy,
Don’t be mad at me
I didn’t mean
To make you angry

I just wanted
To say---

Mommy!
Stop!
I didn’t mean
To hurt your feelings!

Mommy,
Stop hurting me!
Stop pulling my hair,
Mommy!

Mommy,
Please,
Don’t hurl me
Against the wall

Mommy,
I’m begging you
Please
Stop this

Mommy,
You killed me!

Mommy,
All I wanted
To say
Is I loved you.

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  • oWl Quill
    October 19

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    Ouch. Your poetry is always so emotional you can't help but feel the words. I actually read this over your shoulder when your were writing it @ skool lol, but still great job!


  • unbroken2 broken
    October 17
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    it's really deep like forreal my mum was and is the same
    mo matter what happends it's not good enuogh you know


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 17
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    sad, all i can cause i lose all words, keep it flowing