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u wont understand

its killing me...slowly eating at me..
welcoming chocked screams each blow a reminder of the forgotten...
almost even callin ...calling falling...
as i watch my knees buckle hitting iced grounds without a sound..
everythings clear, dear in a nightmare kind of way..
the one thing i was never good at was lieing..
something they all had degrees ..
i like to believe ..pretend
that they care..
somebody cares..?
anybody cares..
but i know better thn to hope..
then to dream..
you dont understand a word im saying..
i've made up my mind..
this time i have..
let it kill me..
watch broken sunsets turn
shattered stone grey
smiling...

i cant write anymore..it sucks i know

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 21

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    for the gray walls coincide with life that never seems to smile .. the ups and downs tattered in woes and the song sung tunes down low I love this deep in thought Hugs Angel♥


  • fanaa
    October 16
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    i don knw i suck at writing lol...i cant seem to write it al comes out wrong or not at all...


  • oldschoolhero
    October 16
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    hwhatwhathawthatat
    nooo

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