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Drifting

my eyes fell empty
i sewer i've lot my soul
my head sure is akeing
damn i'm on a roll
this entire world all seems to be shaking
soon as now the ground starts crumbling
looking into the young eyes of a lad
i wish i still had such heart inside
so i end this write a little bit off
but please don't worry
ill fix it sometime for fun

Author notes

a little something from the heart -sniffles as i began to cry- lol hope ya like it

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  • InnocentDemoness
    October 19
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    i like ur writing


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    October 17

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    strong words that come from that place always seem to come out the best in my eyes, so i can only say keep it flowing, i know i liked it