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Seconds

She never really feared
She didn't seem to care
Each slice of thrill she did eat
Life was but a dare

No matter what the risk
The blood, the hurt, the sweat
She did it all, she lived it up
No never would she fret

It only takes one shake
One mistake all unintended
The thrill has turned out wrong
In seconds it's all ended

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3) Slice, Sweat, Seconds

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  • peadiotrocity101
    October 20
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    I love this poem for a lot of reasons

    this is great

  • Haret5
    October 17

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    Nice Poem

    I enjoyed your poem. But I am not completely sure of what it means but I am pretty sure it is about a daredevil who went to far and was killed (possibly by eating food?). You did a good job on this poem.