i am so lost,
i've fallen so deep,
slipped down a hill,
that is oh so steep..
i'm done with this place,
i'm giving up on the fight..
i may only last
one more night..
cuz everyone here
doesn't care about me..
they all turn their backs,
so fastly they flee...
for i do not win
no matter how hard i try..
i'm done with the breakdowns
no more tears i will cry..
so now i will say
my final goodbye..
and leave this world
knowing no one will cry...
Author notes
this is how i feel
A contest entry
- Write what you feel by StarlightCerulean.
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Comments
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awwww hun
i would cry you sound like a sweet girl,
in alot of pain. kinda like me
great poem, just like the rest of your work i loveeee it
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omg this is so good i love it nice work
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someday someone will come near you to care
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i sure hope so
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2nd stanza first line last word you put pace not place
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thanks fixed it!
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There is always someone that will care. Remember that.
Well rhymed, well worded, I liked it. -
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ha thanks
adn sadly ur wrong... -
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No, I'm really not.
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