I stopped being around you,
So long ago.
All you did is kill me,
And now I am through.
I'm not going back,
Even though It's hard.
'Cause now I'm through with you.
I used to love being around you,
So much It's become a habit.
I know if I stay with you
It'll cost my life.
So now I'm done,
Now I'm through.
Go away, 'Cause even though you're there,
Doesn't you back into my life.
Author notes
Okay... I know that people who are quiting or have can do it! Good luck to those who had or have that addiction.
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Comments
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Hey, its a great write, describes the relationship between the person and the addiction well, thank you xxx
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