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Love, Life, and Happiness

"so what do you want out of life?"

to be an army wife
to be his wife
to be a mother to his children
and to write and teach

"that is too much"

for all the things
he has done for me
it is nothing

and yet
nothing i can do
will ever be enough
to make him be
as happy as he made me

"and how will you know when he is that happy?"

he is now
i hope
we both are

"and the pain?"

pain is part of life

"what is th future going to be?"

the past is the future
that has but happened

the future is the past
that just has not happened yet

if i have to have a
future without him
it will not be a future

"you need to stop hiding behind poetry"

i have never felt more open

are we done now?

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conversationwith my shrink today [oct 16, 09]

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  • Shaded DevilFox gold member
    October 16

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    again, your shrink is dumb.

    I love this piece, you are so gifted My Love. You have no idea just how much this poem soothes my Soul... You are always too kind for words love. Excellent write, I also like the part with 'the future is the past that has but yet happened' very poetic Love.

    • agreed, my darling one, agreed! she is.

      you have a soul?! i mean.... you have a soul? since when? XP

      thanks angel, i love you.

  • Montey silver member
    October 16

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    It seems like you are expressing yourself through your poetry.I thought it was well written and I really liked the part 'the past is the future that has but happened.The future is the past that just has not happened yet' Hope it all works out.Montey


  • Sonya-Erasmus silver member
    October 16

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    Excellent!!!
    Very well written, I really enjoyed this!
    Just follow your heart.
    Best wishes
    Sonya

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