I travel on my train chugging though space and time
to end my trip with my final destination, the end-of-time
I ride the train, as the physical vehicle leaves the station
as my consciousness is mesmerized on it’s location
I Am still watching from my soul’s eternal eyes
as my consciousness goes on my chosen hypnotic ride
I Am whole, complete, secure, safe and sound
as in a magical, deceptive world, my train moves around
I do believe I am the train carrying the load of emotion
as mirrors along the track in time reflect my devotions
Tracks in the illusory world follow where the mind goes
and with the mind‘s beliefs, emotions of fear and love flow
My tracks run along my selected vibrating astral plane
according to the thoughts I believe, carried on the train
I descend into the depths of good and evil imaginations
and explore the illusions of my own insane creations
Just a temporal experience, traveling in space and time
I can forgive my illusions and ascend at any time
As I rise in vibrations, attracting their manifestations
the tracks in time reach the end-of-time, my destination
Author notes
by: d r i f t i n g c l o u d
Prompt: "When one travels on train of eternity one must have a ticket to show to the train's Inspector on the checking time. The ticket name CONSCIOUSNESS. The name of the Train is "Me" the name of the Inspector is "I". (NOBODY GOES TO THE "I" without "ME") - quote from poet Andre ben-YEHU
I have read several of his poems, including ‘Make It Flow’.
I didn’t intend to write a rhyming poem, it just started out that way, so I let it be.
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A contest entry
- A Dedication To: Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU by liquidmindforever.
6500 points, ended October 26, 7 entries
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Thoughtful. One Soul's Journey!
"As I rise in vibrations, attracting their manifestations
the tracks in time reach the end-of-time, my destination"
Dear Poet!
This encapsulates the Purpose and Meaning of the Journey!
Thank You for Your tribute to Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU!
You have taken the quote and brought forth much Light for those who have
the eyes to see and the Desire to transcend the ego-pain body.
It is a Process asking Us to be persistent and gentle.
Much Gratitude Poet for Honoring Andre ben-YEHU.
Best wishes
and stay
liquid
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Wisdom flowing...
It all says that the Contest's tasks are accomplished.
"Time Traveler" delivers profound thoughts of spiritual and ontologic matters in deep poetic-philosophic imagery.
Much gratitude to the author of "Time Traveler" for this poetic gift.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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This is very good Bonita, it says so much while following a difficult prompt,
Well done
David
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wonderful translation of a trip, I don't know if that is what you intended but to me it brought back memories that are sometimes wordless. Great visual writing, keep it up
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When you pay attention to yourself and you see how you react or respond, you realize it is not you, you are only observing, we react because we have a sense of mine of me of I , all that we see is temporal there is no ownership it is when we realize this it enables us not to react.
train is me the inspector is I
To get to the Father you must go through me
you must obtain (ticket) consciousness to go through me to reach I
This one is certainly going to be bookmarked
God bless you Bonita
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