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Tale Of Love (The Book Of Love)

It was a tale of love between two hearts...
His name Romeo,
Her name Juliet.
They were of star crossed lovers,
Their families hated each other.
They grew through the odds with one significant word,
Love.
Juliet faked her death,
Only problem is Romeo didn't know it.
He found her laying there and he drew the flask,
Which held his poison.
Touching it to his lips he swallowed,
Soon she comes through to see he's dead.
She takes the dagger and rams it deep,
Into her heart, It no longer beats.
It was a tale of love between two hearts,
Now it's just a book of love,
To remain those to stay sane,
And be careful of it's game!

Author notes

The Book Of Love

I took in consideration Romeo and Juliet when I did this piece. Hopefully you enjoy it!

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  • TroubleInMyMind
    November 12
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    Wow

    Powerful write.
    Romeo and Juliet had it rough and that's for sure.
    I'll never complain about my love life again!


  • lovlilmystery
    November 6

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    Beautiful piece, of lovers. They happen to be one of my favorites, from Shakespeare. Loved the way, you put it into your words. Good luck in the contest. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi

  • aychellus gold member
    October 27
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    nice homage to a great work well done!!!!

  • This was amazing. I have never watched the book or even watched the movie. i am sure that I am going to have too now. I really enjoyed reading this. This was good. Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest!