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Love truly

You often ask "why you"
so many reasons, so many things about you
you've brought me a different view
I can't imagine my life without you

You're the best thing that's ever happened to me
we met at a time we needed each other
we came together- such beauty
now it's forever- love truly

I was reaching out, you took hold
I was seeking, so full of doubt
I was so cold
you warmed my heart, parted the clouds

We want each other
we compliment each other
you get me, I get you
we need each other
we are forever- such beauty, love truly

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  • This was a nicely written piece of work you have here. I found this really enjoyable too read. Had a good flow too it. Keep up the good work.

  • luv2dream gold member
    October 16
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    you communicate your love for her so well...lovely!