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My eyes

why don't you look into my eyes
and try to see past these lies
I keep trying to move forward
But everyone’s tries to put me in the ward
I try to run try to hid
But I'm shaking like im cold
but the truth is im afraid
I saw the light
it isn't that bright
My sun is going out
I’m freezing without you
You say you love me is it true
I needed you to stay
And all you had to say
Was that it’s not meant to be
So im letting you free
Run away now don't look back
Your the one i took out of the pack
Look into my eyes
And I’ll see past those lies
Just look me in my eyes

Author notes

this is just something that came to my mind

idk

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  • Demone Cat
    October 23
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    Awesome... could be sad though :/ STOP WITH THE SADNESS!!!!!!!!! ur a good poet though and yes it's me :/

  • wow this is amazing. i agree with the looking past the lies part this is simply amazing. sad but amazing

  • cool

    did you randomly make that up, cause i didn't feel any emotion


  • Antidote-Kisses
    October 18
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    awwww......this was so sad i love it though keep up the good work cutie lol
    ttyl