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Reach Out Towards The Sky

sighs flow quickly out of my mouth as my hands reach for cloud nine
my eyes are closed shut as the rays of heaven shine upon me
i tremble at the presence of holy light, my expression, rather crooked
a vision travels inside my head, this might be the end.

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Life is easy, death is peaceful. The transition between the two is the challenge.

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  • firefly star
    October 22
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    nice. i loved your AN. thanks for entering my contest, good luck and keep writing poet!