Dying inside
Crying outside
Wishing you would just stop
the pain is everywhere
in your eyes
in my soul
in everything I feel
make the pain go away
plz just make it stop
you know how much it hurts but you don't care
take it away
Plz someone,
anyone, make it stop
make my pain go away.
A contest entry
- Best Emo Write Ever by VampireKitty-.
400 points, ended October 28, 44 entries
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this is a good poem
thats how i feel -
Awesome write very painfully delicious
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hard to think of what to say when you have lived through something like this yourself, or in my case still are. right now the pain is the only thing telling me i am human and alive. keep it flowing
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Damn, this rings so familiar to me. The world would be a happier place if we could right the hearts wronged to the point of feeling this. This is an excellent write so full of hurt and pain. You want to be strong and store it away, but you need someone intelligent enough to say, somethings wrong and I am here to listen. Keep writing
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this is amazing! full of emotion
and if there is something bothering you feel free to talk to me i know i dont know you that much but im a good listener
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