Dusk lay in the hush,
that captivate her charm
Want entwined whispers
stroke desire
Eyes began seduction...
together they explored
Author notes
Use my list of words only, words can't be used twice, no more than 20 words.
A contest entry
- My Words. Your Motion. by msbeeautch2u.
550 points, ended October 20, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
I thought this is a very insightful and telling. piece two words well done. This poem shows and very imaginative. I love the content and images. smooth readingI look forward to your next one Alexander QQ...
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Perfect!
"Eyes began seduction...
together they explored"
Of course, only one who has been there would know.
Howard
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"Eyes began seduction...
together they explored"
So much stated in these six words. It's something we can all relate to (I hope.) I have felt that the eyes are the best tool of seduction...by far!
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excellent use of the words
I hope you win it! you managed to do this so well
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Hmm...! dusk lay in the hush, take it slow, no rush...what can I say...hmm?
I think you said it Mal!
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just beautiful!
love and blessings
Rend
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PASSIONATE!!!
Two people lock eyes, then exchange smiles, then greetings. Then the attraction begins!
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Short... but very very very sweet and seductive. Tastefully done.
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Grrrrrowwwwl
Sexy! The eyes contain the power of the mind. I like the way you "end" with the "beginning"...if that makes sense?!?
Good Luck!! -
Nicely done
Best of luck to you
Regards
Sonya
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