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Each stone curve
carved in perfect angles,
mirroring yolk of life
in cold surface,
a topping of fresh foliage,
sprinkled with single bloom.

Such pretty masquerade,
still
a pretty masquerade.



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  • Venugopal gold member
    October 31

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    serene and nostalgic dear sister


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 17

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    I love this poem
    It gave me something special to ponder over
    the lovely thoughts reap within

    Thank you and my best wishes

    Julie

    • crimsondew
      October 17
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      You are very welcome....It was a very lovely image that you posted

  • Venugopal gold member
    October 17
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    nice piece to read

    Such pretty masquerade,
    still
    a pretty masquerade.

    yes


  • Topaze
    October 16
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    A lovely piece, my best wishes.

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