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Fingers Crossed

He always gives me butterflies
I giggle when i hear his name
My cheeks go all red and smiley
As i dance like i'm insane
He watches me; laughing
Wearing nothing but my heart
Tattooed onto his wrist
Written by love of art
I hold his hand so tight
Kissing exclusively his lips
Day dream about rainbows
And then my heart skips

is this love?
I giggle, i hope it is...

...FingersCrossed.

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I wrote this for my boyfriend. Nathan Frazer (: been together 7months. so in love. hope you like it.

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  • Sonya-Erasmus silver member
    October 16

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    This is really great!
    So sweet and innocent.
    I love how you express your feelings.
    Love makes everybody feel childish in a way,
    blushing and giggling.
    Oh what a great feeling!
    You bring such sweet memories to mind.
    Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
    Best of luck in the contest
    Kind regards
    Sonya


  • Under My Willow
    October 16

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    "I giggle when I hear his name, my cheeks go all red and smiley, as I dance like I'm insane" those have got to be some of the most awesome lines of poetry I've ever read. You are very talented for being 16