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Lay My head On Lies

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sitting at the computer talking to my friend

Life as I knew it almost came to an end

A steamy conversation typed across the screen

Lost in fantasy almost like a dream

Who are you talking to, I heard my husband's voice

I had to think of something; I didn't have much choice

I tried to hide the words and create in his mind doubt

He said, `Take your damn computer and get the hell out'

I lied and said it was someone else, what he thought he saw was wrong

Thinking of another lie didn't take me long

I said he ruined his birthday and the plans I was making

With my arms around his neck professing love while faking

I know I'll have to pay and I've made my own bed

But for tonight at least I know, I have a place to lay my head.

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Contest Lies To Keep Out of Trouble by SteveandSon

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  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 17

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    lmao
    Wonderful piece you have penned
    Very hilarious and true as well
    Great flow and rhyme
    Congratulations on the HM
    Very well deserved

    Have a wonderful night

    David


    • GuiltedShadow gold member
      October 17
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      Well, we're only married on paper, but this is his house. It's ok for him, just not me. FML, MLIA lol


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    October 17

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    Omigosh. This was a powerful poem. Is this true? Great rhyme and flow, and congratulations on your HM.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • darlee77 gold member
    October 17

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    Great twist on the prompt. Well written and very creative. God bless


  • SteveandSon gold member
    October 17

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    This has me laughing and the end was just too good. lol Awesome poem with great flow and rhythm. Good luck in the contest and thank you very much for entering it. Have a great night.
    Your Shadowed Brother,
    Steve


    • GuiltedShadow gold member
      October 17
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      Thank you Shadowed Brother. It's an honor to win a trophy in your contest.


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 16

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    lol to this cunning clever and real quick with a come back classy

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