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Hush

Once together, spell has held them captive:
fingers explore, touch and stroke follow;
but quicksand is anywhere.
They whisper: Tomorrow ...

Author notes

Restricted by ... words! LOL
20 words chosen from the set word bank

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Camille Morin gold member
    October 26

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    See what a marvelous writer you are? Under such constraints, you still paint smooth strokes that show your heart. I love this.

    Camille


  • Angelic Wolf
    October 16

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    I like this
    It is really good.
    Good luck in the contest


  • laura0757 gold member
    October 16

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    I liked these few words, especially the way you wrote..........tomorrow...I am not good at comma's and stuff like that, and the proper use of them I suck the bag big time, lol........any how...............lots of luck with these few short enticing words...............


  • Sonya-Erasmus silver member
    October 16

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    Next time they should give you at least 60 words
    Great job
    I would love to hear the ending to your story
    Best of luck to you
    Sonya


  • Jesann gold member
    October 16

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    Very creative with the word restriction.
    Very well done.
    Great work.

  • msbeeautch2u
    October 16

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    I Liiike It!!

    Again...this is what I'm looking for!! You have a title that fits your story, and you were able to tell a story in just 20 words. AND as i read it...i can FEEL it. Great job.
    Good luck!!

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