I knew it wouldn't be long
Untill i remembered us; together
I can still hear your voice
And i float away on a feather
You grip my hand without a touch
We make love only in dreams
I suppose the feelings i hold
Will always be there it seems
You were my secret almost lover
Whispered into our forever
Carved into our trees of forgotten
No tears or dust whatsoever
Maybe first loves weren't ment to die
They are like a forever kiss
Sweet, charming and almost perfect
But in ways most meaningless
And as i leave to crumble alone
stitching my almost broken heart
I put out my stale cigarette
And wished we were apart
Author notes
I got inspiration for this piece listening to sad songs when Mairead and I were together. ♥
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I Thought it was Real Good
I think you did very Well on this. It's a sad but caring way of explaining how you would feel at a time like that. Keep up The Good Work
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