Crisp seasons bed down in hibernation of pleasure
under garments trace finger tips to explore
softly perfumed
he inhales.. her whispers
to lie.
Author notes
she whispers pickled sheets of lullabies
in black tea confection
10 to 45 words
In a list
A contest entry
- quuuuuuuuuuickie! by Kathraina.
460 points, ended October 16, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
What a great write. So very deserving of the gold. Congratulations
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Wow. This is really to the point for so few words. Men do like quite alot, don't they?
Well, I guess in their own right, so do women.
This was awesome! And you deserved to win the gold. Keep up the good writing!
Vhoori
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(i think "too" should be "to" in the last line)
I absolutely love this, you got the concept of the prompt perfectly! Your imagery and metaphor here is stunning.
bravo and thank you for entering
♥ kate -
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Oh wow thank you
I will correct the to
A great contest x
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A lovely write, my best wishes.
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