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Just Love

These walls are closing in,
Why can't i just have someone to care for,
Why won't someone tell me they love me,
These bones won't stay strong anymore.

Trying to conquer this task called life,
Getting hard when you find out no one cares,
Getting hard for me to breath when no one can say
I love you,
Still Trying to live this undefiled life.

Won't God give me a break?
Won't he let this vein break?
Won't she just listen to my stories?

I just want someone to tell me they Love Me, and for once,
Actually believe it...

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Written April 11th, 2004

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  • shortyjo
    April 11, 2004
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    *Sigh* I think everyone feels like this at some point. The world can be a lonely place. I hope you find that somebody. Meanwhile keep on writing beautiful poetry.


  • Sunshine Always
    April 11, 2004
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    Written with deep feeling,and easy to relate to. Sometimes when we search to hard we miss the reason.....Take care...