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an impression

In my smallest place,
in your passing glance,
I see us in the country

warm windows fog
over slow mornings.
Like the ebb and flow of seasons we'd
lay tangled for hours;
then its cold in the air
before the leaves change
or we walk under
Fall snow as you leave.

there's a reality there
I can't even begin to touch-

though out of season,
forgotten by morning,
its beautiful, sublime
there and then.

Author notes

I wrote this today. Its snowing in october.

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  • simply softly
    November 4
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    come come now love such simple desires to be fufilled in time


  • chloris
    October 16

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    tara quoted my favourite lines. so jake... i am glad you are alive. this is wonderful. your voice is your own- it's one and consistent.


  • tara wilson gold member
    October 16

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    really? where are you?
    "there's a reality there
    I can't even begin to touch-" i can so feel this ..

    Jake this is beautiful - i am so happy to read you again, it's been such a long time.... you are a beautiful writer with a wonderful voice.


    • monstruo
      October 16
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      I'm in New York. Endicott to be specific, Ithaca earlier.