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Eiffel Easy

  All i did
  was set up
the VCR.

  and it was
  the most
  alive i've
felt in years.

    here we go
    again;

      I fall easy.

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  • Tqop
    October 21
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    What about DVD players?


  • shattered.frisco
    October 20

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    I don't know if you meant for this to be funny, but I'm laughing hysterically. See, I read this poem in bits, seeing as I'm watching TV and rocking Lilly with my foot in her swing while reading this. I read the first stanza and then took a break, then my mind pictures some lonely sexy housewife that just stepped outta the shower, and the doorbell rings so she runs to the door all wet and half dressed and some UPS guy with his shirt unbuttoned says "oh i got a package for you" and they go have hot passionate sex

    The next stanza, I pictured their orgasm, heated and on the kitchen table, where not 3 hours ago, she ate breakfast with her big wig husband, who perhaps uses prostitutues on the side. idk But any way, the "here we go again" part, the husband comes home and the wife freaks because he'll get mad at her for cheating on him, so she throws his clothes on the UPS guy and throws him outta the house. Then the husband walks in at the "i fall easy" part, because, well I'm watching CSI, and a guy just beat his wife with a belt because she was cheating, and so she fell down

    I guess I got the UPS idea cuz ya know, sometimes repair men set up VCR's and stuff?

    was that random? i hope so


  • raw love
    October 16
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    chuckles. oh joe...