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Another bland evening
In this run down van
Body beating
Eyes bleeding

You shuffle closer
Smiling
We might need visine

I let giggles slip
Hiding fear of those lips
I may kiss and stick
Like iced metal

Could you be love?

I second guess with
Too many hits

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