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Average

Unique

Or so she thought
Not the artistic misfit
Label she sought

Intelligent

With an elite lot?
Discussions too hard to comprehend
Fought too hard to blend

She was hot

Amongst dog faced women
Big boned country gals
without class

Average

Where?

Not amongst city gals
Fashion know alls
with perfect body, perfect hair

Not amongst country hicks
Rough and rugged
With a hard heart, a hard stare

So average she was

Unique

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Months without writing and I come out with this...

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  • meic
    November 10

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    Self-evaluation isn't easy ... maybe [if taken too seriously] not even desirable. This poem is an interesting and sardonic exploration of the subject and a really thoughtful read. Thank you.
    Mike


    • ChelseySmile
      November 10
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      Haha. Thank you for reading
      It was a bit bitter and
      it was my attempt to overcome writers block.