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Deviations

When life's trials wear you thin and you are begging for release
nothing but the coldest ground will support you

If everything you know and love and feel is for naught
seek comfort in the solidarity of earth and man

Your fatal flaw and greatest weakness flay you out
to dry in the suns of all those blazing revelations

Know your only true faith can be knowledge
test your frail limits with a learning honed to kill

Seethe and grow and vomit out that awful puppet
revolution pushing from the maw  of new ideals

Learn and know and defy fear,
Defy and oppose all those trite and worldly failures

humanity is the absence of natural development

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  • onofognol
    October 22
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    and your little dog too!