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A Pear for the Wicked

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lustful longing
 
for flesh...sweet, wet

delicate, dripping juices

delight the tongue

whet the appetite

in autumnal allure

a rustic romance

of fruitful desires
 
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  • secberm
    October 15

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    Is this really a pear? I thought it was an apple. I like the bottom. Oh, I mean ending. :-)

    How are you, my sweet?


    • AzureBlue gold member
      October 15
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      Dezzzzzz!!!!

      I've missed you! I didn't think anyone could read it yet...there was no background, right? Now there's a background, not that it makes any difference to the poem.
      I'm ok...you know, the trials and tribulations of...whatever.
      How are you? What's happening in your life these days???
      Are you happy?
      I hope so.

      peace and hugs to you my friend...

      (trying to remember how to do emoticons...lol)
      Lorena~