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Moons, Monsters and Carrion

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An eerie moon lights evil walls that glow in midnight’s hue,

While caterwauls of banshee sound o’er rats and feeding shrew.

The carrion of ghoulish feast, so foul that vultures flee

Is strewn across the cobbles like some fiend’s grotesque debris.

Now unbeknownst to ladies who are gathered in the hall

To celebrate the harvest with an autumn festal ball,

The creature who eviscerates all unsuspecting foe

Is slith’ring up that glowing wall with malice none can know.

The somber silence saturates the dank and dismal air,

Then seeps beneath the hard-closed doors t’ward dancers, unaware.

Transparent fog of destiny engulfing all in sight,
The dancers seem eternal though this be their final night.

Down corridors of much-tread stone, a trail of slime appears,

As moonlight glistens on that path, no sound assaults their ears,

For creatures that scale castle walls in search of prey at night
Are merciless and care not who they pillage or they smite.

A gloom beyond description, a debilitating fog,

Hung by one who is creating the final epilogue.

The dancers pause to catch a breath not knowing it’s their last.
They laugh and smile not knowing that they are a grim repast.

A rending crash, the door is smashed, the wrath of hell is loosed.

The creature rises to the roof, now no one is excused.

With gnashing teeth and flaming eyes and mouth frothed o’er
with gore,
He rends the folk and banquet hall like none have rent before.

The floor besmirched by carrion, long caked by age and time,

Where all is dried except of course the uncongealed red slime.

The stench beyond imagining still holds the world at bay,

Behind the moon-drenched glowing walls that n’er will see the day.

Author notes

Scared myself writing this one.

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  • Pallas Athena
    October 20
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    This one rocks, and just in time for Halloween!!


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 18

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    excellent

    Wow
    This is a very dark and haunting poem you have penned here
    Love the tale and the imagery as well
    Also nice to meet you....I entered this one too hope you come give mine a read as well
    Best of luck in the contest
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Arrianna MacEwan
    October 17

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    This was possibly the creepiest thing I have read in quite some time. I am reminded of Beowulf and Grendle. Gerard Butler needs to save the day in a sequel!! (Not that I liked that film, I actually refuse to watch it because of its failure to stick to the story) You always have such perfect meter and always the most eloquent vocabulary. I am in awe of you sir. Was this written in Iambic pentameter?

  • Purrsanthema
    October 17

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    Reminds me a bit of parts of Beowulf: had no idea those pesky critters were so rampant! Perfectly in tune with the season!


  • Veronica Leigh
    October 16

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    Holy crap. I LOVE this. I thinks it's my favorite of yours for sure. wow. AWESOME!!!! Really fun to read and I know how hard it is to write like that (and I definitely can't do it). That's like something straight from my brit lit class!


  • Seawulf
    October 16
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    All I can say is Wow....I wish i was as talented as you!!!

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