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Distraction

Upon a slight bump in the ground the grass flows,
much like swaying kelp under an ocean current,
the fluid winds breeze through the blades,
causing them to perform a rolling green wave,
consuming the soil and inhabitants underneath,
the backround of tall slender trees fits,
perfectly with the contrasting blue shades of mountains,
and the single deer staring past me along the forests edge,
this might possibly be the most peaceful state i've ever been in.

Something in my backpack rattles and I pull out a snickers.

What was I talking about again?

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  • nous. gold member
    October 23
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    lol! uh.. didn't expect the ending. beautiful imagery though:]