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(D)Impression

Walls closing in and dirty fingertips
Washed up face and a feeling of shame
Pour some liquer in and try to go to sleep
Will it be better?

The sun is too bright but the night is too dark
no light in the sky can make you feel glad
a stack of cloths still waiting for the laundry
a pack of smokes, moments till they get in

 

Nightmares, nightmares oh the nightmares

sometimes when asleep but sometimes wide awake

in any case the scarcely go away

vicious beast, enormous butterflies and often just me

 

No pills yet though

no drugs indeed

I'm taking my time on this hazardous slip 

 

Author notes

Topic Depression *apparently*

A contest entry

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Comments

  • this is so powerful.
    i know exactly how this all feels.

    finalist.
    good luck.

    • Latradi
      November 11
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      Hey thanks for your comment. Really powerful idea for a contest is what helped me