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Mechanical Love

Mechanical mechanisms
Winding up
And winding down
Paint a smile
Paint a frown
I'm your robot
You're my power
Kiss me and bring me to life

I'm metal and marvelous
A robotic wonder
Plug me in
Start my heart
Listen to the sound
When you're done
Turn off my lights
And watch me fall to the ground

I am nothing but your puppet
Just your dainty little toy
An ever-living girl
For the ever-loving boy






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  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    October 16
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    love this. and i agree wiff megan

    love the last stanza and... well basically the whole thing XD


  • meggie94x
    October 15
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    i likes this a lot actually. i like things about robots adn love and toys. i know that sounds weird but u get my point

  • phillyhottpockets
    October 15

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    very good
    id wink at you but 1 that would be kinda weird (to me anyway) and 2 i dont feel like typing in the smiley for it so ill just do this dont ask why im just being weird at the moment