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Promise

No matter what may come
life, moves foward

We are all changing and
growing......

As we grow, we meet new
challenges

It is a never ending circle

And, so I shall continue to,
help you as you have helped me!

A contest entry

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  • jeseejoy
    November 4
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    thats on of those poems that should be on the back of a book or somthing


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 26
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    Wonderfully expressed...

    Short, sweet, & straight to the point. Best wishes in the contest!!
    Peace,
    xx Cyn


  • Shakes-spear
    October 22
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    That is the real deal

    I help you and you help me. We are all in this as one. I just wish we all saw this in that light. The world could be so much better if we did not have to spend so much money and blood on protecting what we love! Very nice poem. Good luck with your trip. My prayers have and will be with you! God bless, The Shaker


  • paul claxton
    October 22
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    thought provoking