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Lea's Dance

With bells on her fingers and rings on toes
She dances, making the world go round
And the music of laughter follows, where ever she goes
She sings just to heep her joy from exploding,
the words powerful enough to make any broken heart soar
The wet grass spinns and weaves under her dancing bare feet
With silks in the breaze, escaping the rain,
She wishes on four leaf clovers and dreams of forever
Her eyes are aglow, like two small suns,
setting in a starry sky
The forget-me-nots twist and turn all up in her hair
with baited breath and tingeling skin,
she dances on in utter bliss
All the while the palest moonlight flickers above

Author notes

Patchwork again, but I like this one Lea is a character in a short story i'm writing for class and this is he rperaonality.

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