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Summer's Portrait

The love that summer wove
Sang gentle in the trees
All throughout the land Her song echoed in the breeze.

 

Summer loved to paint,

Her masterpiece out stretched,

Colors vibrant from the hills,

To roll throughout the land

 

Countless yellow flowers,

So delicately formed,

Upturned to taste the golden sun,

To hold dear summer's hand.


Frothy water called,

So bright inn blues and greens,

Tumbling over grey washed stones,

To rest on sandy shores.

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  • Massacringchainsaw
    October 15

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    I Love The Image

    I really like the way you made it so that the words projected the image. when you described the vibrent colors i thought it was amazing
    im new at this whole poetry thing but if i were to revise it i would use different word patterning