I always turn right when I should turn left
I give up a lover and end up bereft
Then I meet my dream man and lose my heart
You see its all been pre planned from the start
If its meant to be it will happen no doubt
It’s the rule of life and a rule you cant flout
You cant pick and choose it will happen anyway
You think you have choice but you don’t have a say
The path is chosen you just have to walk straight
And leave your life in the hands of fate
A contest entry
- Fate by Roseamongweeds.
520 points, ended October 24, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a great message. Very true as I guess we all end up seeing. Well written.
We all wander around lost and there's nothing to be done except accept whatever. All the best!
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Hi Terri....I'm a great believer in fate
and I think this is a winner, it flows well
and has a message too.
Lots of luck dearie....love Lu x
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Yes indeed! How excellent! And those who walk away from their fate have very difficult lives!
Great message and rhyme! Best wishes in this contest
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That is brilliant
Terri, it has a perfect flow, no awkward bits at all. Loved it and I dont think it could be bettered.
in the contest (I wont be corny and say it's fate for you to win) lol
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Fate is Gods way of saying " your to young of a spieces to know whats best for you". Yet like a young child we still see how far we can push fate. Sometimes it reaches up and bites us on the butt just as a reminder that there is a plan don't screw with it. Another great poem from a very talented poet. Good luck in the contest.
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Wow. very convincing. -laughs- You taught me a new word! Excellent rhymes and vocabulary!
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I LOVED this!!! Awesome! I have often felt like my life is like this! Great Job!
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