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Tumbleweed Drama


Dinner at a family restaurant for a father and his son
Catching up on things they both had done

At a table near them, three men were being rude
Their language was considered by all to be quite crude

This is where my son came in to play
He happened to be the manager on duty that day

He had a talk with them explaining the simple fact
This was a family place, no need for talk like that

Having done his duty, back to the office he went
A few moments later, a server to him was sent

Seems that the father had invited those guys outside
My son was quite worried they might tan his hide

Out of the building fast as he could go
There on the porch he was treated to quite a show

The father had gotten all three against the wall
My son was now worried for the men after all

Did this person have a gun? How else could it be
That those rowdy guys were standing so quietly?

When questioned by my son the dad said not to stress
He was passing out tickets he went on to confess

Then holding his badge out to my son
He said, “It’s illegal to harass a cop for fun”

“They started in again after seeing you were gone
So I decided to handle this one on my own”

now let this be a lesson to everyone far and wide
An off duty cop could be close by your side

If someone asks you to keep your cursing down
Best to respond with a smile instead of a frown

Author notes

(my oldest son is a kitchen manager at a Tumbleweed restaurant)

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  • Kathraina gold member
    October 20

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    Oooh I just love this!
    Very humorous tale with vivid imagery! Your rhyme is flawless and near jaw-dropping! Brilliant write


    bravo and thank you for entering




    ♥ kate


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 17

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    excellent

    Really enjoyed this one sis
    Tumbleweed is still one place I have yet to eat......
    Maybe next time I am in the big city will try it
    I just posted some new ones hope you come give them a read
    One is dark for Halloween...I usually stay with nature LOL
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 17

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    i love the moral of the story! well penned
    Cathy and the rhyme awesome as always

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 16

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    Awesome sis
    You words sure painted the scene set and wow you pulled no punches here
    Loved it
    Best wishes and much love

    Julie

  • This is fantastic Mom! I know Bill will just love it. Great job as always.
    Love you guys,
    Crystal

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