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Lifes Fight

I know its been a while, been busy, but heres a new one.

LIFES FIGHT
Here I wait
Never knowing what for
All the voices
In my dreams
Tell me to stop
And turn away
But I shall wait
In this hellish nightmare
That is becoming my life
All these voices
Of those that gave up
Who lost their patience
Their fighting spirit
Tell me to turn away
To give up my war
But why?
I still breathe
My heart still beats
So I will continue
I will not give up
There is nothing to stop me
From achieving my life
And in the end
If I shall die
I will still live on
These things I've said
Those that I've touched
I have left a mark on this world
And although I may go
And my name be forgotten
Those will last forever
My words will stay
And they
Will always remember what I've taught
So I will not stop my fight
I will continue
Until the day I die
I will fight
To keep us alive
I battle
So that they
Can be at peace
I will not stop
This fight will go on
The words of those
Who have already given up
Can never stop me
And I fight
Because thats all life is.........

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