Take it in your hand, Hold it close, let it cool you
Dance with it, Let it embrace you in the dark
Takes your worries
Replaces them with love
Even if only for one night
Take it in your hand, Press it to your lips, Let it fill you
Follow it down down, Deeper in
Invites you smiling
And locks the door
You belong to it tonight
Take it in your hand, Give it your lips, Your body, Your soul
Talks to you, Talks to her
Takes you away
Evil smiles
As memories are wiped
Take it in your hand, Hold it close, Let it calm you
Sneak, Creep, Disappear into the morning
Takes your pain
Makes you numb
Just to get get you through the day
Author notes
ok so let me expain it a little bit
the 1st verse is the fun
2nd is the getting drunk but your not worried
3rd is now very drunk the bit where people do stupid things just because theyve been drinking
4th the being ashamed of the night but turning to the bottle to get you through the day
ok so i hope it makes sence, it started as just the tital, something i came up with when i met a guy and tho i liked him, i could never tell if what was happening was real or was the alcohol talking to me.
so yeah.....hopes you like it i guess
where could i change it for the better?
Comments
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Welcome to Allpoetry
The funny part is, I could relate to this.
When I was your age, I used to like this guy; he used to say all kinds of things, including the L-word, whilst intoxicated... I was never sure whether or not he was sincere, but the fact that he's with me three years later must mean something. 
Your spelling needs a lot of work, but that's what editors are for. You have a great starting-idea, and your poems will get better with experience and age. 
Well done, and keep writing!
Laura
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