there once was a girl
who sat and she cried..
she never succeeded
no matter how hard she tried..
everyone around her,
has been tearing her down...
her boyfriend left her,
friends stopped comin around..
everyone hates her,
they make her feel so alone,
the pain she bares, and
the tears never shown...
so tonight she sits
up in her room...
swallowed by darkness
submerged in gloom...
she looks in the mirror,
and starts to cry..
finally deciding,
tonight she will die...
because no one cares
she takes out her knife
slices her wrists..
thus ending her life...
Author notes
this is about how i feel and the way i wish i could make it end
A contest entry
- heartbroken by vampireintherain.
410 points, ended October 29, 13 entries
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Comments
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this is so sad
im so sorry you feel this way
this was a perfect poem
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thisi is real sad i am srry u feel that way so do i an i love thiss poem nice work
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thanks you have some really goood poems too
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it is sooo sad, i can feel the sadness.good job and good luck in the contest
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love this!!!
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thanks
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no problem it was really good
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