Your love is like a cold river –-
-- That is to say; refreshing.
Well... it's like that ten year-old penny
--What I mean is: it's maddening when lost.
Ok, Well, your love is like an electric current;
-- It's constant!
No, no, no! Your love is like an old, ratty sweater;
It's comforting.
Please stay! It's like a rainy day;
I need it.
So, ok: it's like a bleeding gash --
Your love heals.
I've got it. Your love is like a trapdoor spider--
You know... patient!
Ok, well, how about this: your love is like a flesh-eating bacteria:
You only see it once.
No? Your love is like a Buddhist chant
-- I mean -- it's calming!
Alright: your like a Statistics class;
C'mon, it never ends!
I've got it! Your love is like Fascism --
-- It's extremely right!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Haha... so good. I've never read anything like this before. you rock.


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i like it! hehe. good job.

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HAHAHAHAHAHA +40 POINTS FOR YOU! This is brilliant! Thank you for making me smile tonight



